Talk:Snake (Mother)

About the snake
Its description was modified, because it looked too much like a strategy guide, rather than pure information. For those who make these pages (for bosses or enemies in general), try never to use the second person or to focus too much in all the battle strategies that can be used. I mean phrases like "If you have learned PK Thunder by now, have Kumatora use it and Duster heal her PP. It's also good if you throw a Smoke Bomb the first turn." should be changed to "This boss is weak to lightning attacks but strong to ice and fire (don't remark weaknesses only), and is vulnerable, like most, to smoke bombs.", that is if the smoke bomb commentary is necessary. Anyway, I hope this helps. I think I saw the NK Cyborg page like this as well, so if you read this try to rewrite it. Thanks. ~ Shiny Umbreon 18:43, 9 January 2009 (UTC)